More pencils

Trying to get caught up - so I roughed out sumore pencils. I don't think I'm gonna post the lettered pages anymore because someone mentioned to me that they were difficult to read.

How you guys likin' it so far? I got a couple of what I'm calling "fan letters" from different people in different countries - on different CONTINENTS even! I'm considering that "building international buzz!" Tell yer friends!

Any artists or cartoonists reading? How 'bout a critique??